1. Sitting on his rocking, chair holding his cat Fuzzel, staring at the door is Howard Wilson.
2. Bang! Bang! "let us in, we know you're in there" . With glazed over eyes Howard Wilson held on to his cat and focused on the lock on the door that he hoped would not fail him. That was the last time anyone ever saw Howard Wilson.
3. As Becky came to her patient Howard Wilson's house she noticed something very odd, the door was opened. In all of the years she had known him he had never left the door open.
4. Mr. Wilson was a slightly excentric man. Knowing this many people dismissed pretty much everything that he said. Those people who didn't listen are responsible for his death.
5. "What do you know about the dissapearence of a Mr. Howard Wilson?"
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3 comments:
All of your openings are great, but i like the first one (your original one) the best. i think it draws the reader in best. I really like your story too!
YOURE SO SLOW!!!!!
Nice coughting statment. i like how is coughts the reader and it seens to be scary a little. Why wonderf what happens the rest of the story but anyways nice story again. !Well Done!
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